Tuesday, March 2, 2010

A Poem for moi!

I have a new bloggy friend

His name is Mark The Savage
He is big and tatted up
The kind of man I would like to ravage.
He writes amazing poems
You should go over and get to know him.
(Yeah, I know, I suck.  But he doesn't, so go and check him out)

Here is what I made him write for me. 

Danielle's request was about how I can't get my mind off of her ever since we met. She doesn't realize how true it is... (wink) At any rate her's is the most complex poem I have written so far. 8 words per line and 8 lines. Notice how her name is spelled out with the first letter of each word corresponding with each line....

8 Words by 8 Lines = She

Damn! I can’t get her off my brain

Not anyone else has me feeling the same

I go nuts that our worlds are apart

October last year is when we got our start

She, the woman that every night I see

Behind my eyes when I lay myself asleep

She, the reason I do every little thing

She, the only one and She, my everything

-Mark “The Savage” George


  1. I'm on my way over.

    I love you blog. I will be back for more!

  2. Um, could you have meant "moi" (the french spelling for me)? Lol. Just giving you a hard time. You know we all like your use of "wala" instead of voila. hahaha. ;)

    OK, it is quite a lovely poem. But not seeing your name in the first letter of every line. I'm confused.

  3. Alright already! Moi! I changed it. I liked the way mwah looked better though! ;)

  4. Wow, Mark looks very big and tatted and pierced. Sexy poem!

  5. You shoulda kept it! It was hilarious! :)

  6. I have 41 tats total and glad you like the poem....

    MindyMom: Look at the first letter of the first word on the first line then the first letter of the second word on the second line the the first letter of the third word in the third line and so forth....

  7. Bloggy love at it's finest.

    Going to check out the tats.

  8. Yum...I love ink...and poetry too? Be still my heart....

  9. wow that was very powerful..what beautiful things to say about you!

  10. Hmmm.... Do I sense a connection?

  11. Awww, bloggy love is so sweet !

  12. Awesome. A poetry writing man is a keeper. Just sayin'...

  13. Wow, that is some admission, he really wants you! Hope it all works out.


  14. Thats really cool . But I'm missing the name thing too . Well no matter good luck maybe you'll turn out to be soulmates , huh .

  15. Now I want you to remember if he gets outta line stick your finger in that nose ring and pull hard . Only kiddin hahaha

  16. here in ft. collins, we think that guy is a clown!!!!